帮助一个贫穷的女孩儿英语作文，谢谢啦，

Dear Mr Smith
I’m Li Ping who you gave a hand to so that I can’t give up the education. What (made) me （excited） (was) that I received the books and the money, coming back to school so I’m fairly (thankful) to you. What’s(was) better , with the help of the teachers ,I (made) great progresses in study . I was in praise of the teachers, encouraged by the parents. I decided to learn more (harder) to make more great(greater) progresses than now. I except to see you, In spite of the fact that I have no change to Beijing,hope as I want that you can send a photo of your. Thank you!
Best wishes for you!
1th, Feb, 2005
Yours:
Li Hua

这里面错误很多。如果没错那就不是你写的了。嘎嘎。将就一下。