我觉得你应该调整一下头两句话的顺序，应该先问好吧。
Nice to meet you , I'm XXX , It's very kind of you to come to our school for interviewing . My major is International Trade , I think my greatest strength is communication , and I really take a friend genuinely , I believe I will also bring great pleasure to my partner . I have passed the CET-6 at university , but I tend to drive myself hard , I think it's not enough for me , and I'm just taking a spoken English lesson now .I got the informations that your company has the international business , and I hope I can satisfy the demands of your company by my striving , thank you .
我建议你在推敲一下你的这段话，你如果找外企面试，就一定要自信，不能说 “我知道自己还是远不够的话”，对中国人来说这是谦虚，但外国人看来就是没自信的表现，还有最后一句话， “我希望通过我自己的努力更能满足贵公司的用人需要”这是什么意思？改成用人准则，或标准更好点吧， 我做的翻译里，有些更改了语句顺序，和表达方式， 希望能有所帮助，Good luck. (hehe,我尽力修改了，让每个词都比较恰当）
i am honored to meet you today,it is grateful for you come hto interview me all the way.my major is international trade.as far as i am concerned,a big advantage is communicating with others.i like make friends sincerely,and bring happiness to my friends.
i have acquainted that your honorable company has international business.as for myself,i do have a high requirement in my english.yet passing the cet-6,however,i know it is not nearly enough.now i am attending an oral speaking course,hoping i could satisfy the need your honorable company.thank you!
我很热爱工作：i have a great passion in working.
It's my honor to have the opportunity to meet you here. Thank you very much for coming to my uni to interview me.
I am really good at communicating, which I sincerely think is the best of me. I'd love to make friends and bring my happiness for them.
I have got the information that your company has reached the area of international business. I am strict about my Eniglish skillm and I have passed the CET-6 during my uni study. Nevertheless, I know this is not the end of my English studying. I am having a Enlighs Oral Lessons now, and I sincerely hope that I could do the best for your company through my effort.
Thank you.
应该就是这样~~希望你满意~
i'm a international trade major.
i'm very glad to see you,and it is really kind of you to come to my school for this interview.
i think my best merit lies in the aspect of communication. i like making friends sincerely and i'll bring great joy for my friends.
i know that your company has the business of international trade, and i'm a person who is strict with my english. i had passed the CET6,yet i understand that is not enough. i'm taking part in a oral english course. i hope my efforts will meet your company's need of talents. thank you.
It's my honor to have the opportunity to meet you here. Thank you very much for coming to my uni to interview me.
I am really good at communicating, which I sincerely think is the best of me. I'd love to make friends and bring my happiness for them.
I have got the information that your company has reached the area of international business. I am strict about my Eniglish skillm and I have passed the CET-6 during my uni study. Nevertheless, I know this is not the end of my English studying. I am having a Enlighs Oral Lessons now, and I sincerely hope that I could do the best for your company through my effort.
Thank you.
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