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正文:
As more and more Chinese go on overseas trips, reports about their bad manners flood in.
Chinese are embarrassed when foreigners ask them if all Chinese shout loudly, litter or spit everywhere.
The poor behavior or some Chinese has done great harm to our good reputation.
China has become an important corner of the global village.
We have to understand and respect foreigncultures,so as to get along well when having overseas trips.
So before you start your next overseas trip,remember to learn about the culture.
And people there, which aims to improve China's image in foreigners'eyes.
Wherever you go you need to protect the environment. In this way, you'll win respect for yourself as well as our country.
译文:
随着越来越多的中国人出国旅游,有关他们不文明行为的报道如潮水般涌来。当外国人问中国人是否所有中国人都大声喊叫、乱扔垃圾或随地吐痰时,中国人会感到尴尬。
的一些中国人的不良行为对我们的声誉造成了很大的损害。中国已经成为地球村的一个重要角落。我们必须理解和尊重外国。文化,以便在海外旅行时能很好地相处。
所以在你开始下一次海外旅行之前,记住要了解那里的文化和人民,这是为了提高中国在外国人心目中的形象。眼睛无论你去哪里,你都需要保护环境。这样,你就会为自己赢得尊重以及我们的国家。
中国人很多出去旅游都不注意自己的行为,这都是一些土鳖
With the continuous development of society and the improvement of people's living standards, more and more tourists travel overseas. But what comes at any time is the uncivilized behavior of some Chinese tourists when they travel abroad. Why do these things happen? In my opinion, the reasons are as follows:
First of all, the main reason for this phenomenon is that people don't pay attention to their behavior. Besides, some tourists are not familiar with the local culture when they travel overseas. Finally, some Chinese tourists don't care what they say.
Personally, I think Chinese tourists should always pay attention to their words and deeds when they travel overseas. We should not only protect the environment of the scenic spots but also protect the image of Chinese people.
One possible version:
As more and more Chinese go on overseas trips, reports about their bad manners flood in. Many overseas
Chinese are embarrassed when foreigners ask them if all Chinese shout loudly, litter or spit everywhere. The
poor behavior or some Chinese has done great harm to our good reputation.
China has become an important corner of the global village. We have to understand and respect foreign
cultures,so as to get along well when having overseas trips. So before you start your next overseas trip,
remember to learn about the culture and people there, which aims to improve China's image in foreigners'
eyes. Wherever you go you need to protect the environment. In this way, you'll win respect for yourself as
well as our country.
One possible version:
As more and more Chinese go on overseas trips,reports about their bad manners flood in.Many overseas
Chinese are embarrassed when foreigners ask them if all Chinese shout loudly,litter or spit everywhere.The
poor behavior or some Chinese has done great harm to our good reputation.
China has become an important corner of the global village.We have to understand and respect foreign
cultures,so as to get along well when having overseas trips.So before you start your next overseas trip,
remember to learn about the culture and people there,which aims to improve China's image in foreigners'
eyes.Wherever you go you need to protect the environment.In this way,you'll win respect for yourself as
well as our country.