英语作文擅长的帮忙修改一篇我写的中学生五十词作文，可以适当增加与加深篇副，能够的请先回复，作文将会

How time flies!I will graduate from middle school in two month.I'm
eager to shre my happiness and sadness with you.Thinking back,I alwasy
remembered the moving moment.One day,when I stepped into the classrom,my
classmate told me that Mr.Sun,our math teacher,couldn't come to school
because of a terrible traffic accident.I was so worried about him that I
went to the hospital to visit him.Although he got badly hurt,he smiled
to me as usual.Sucn a beautiful smile made me warm and moved.
Mr.Sun
is the teacher who not only gives me knowledge but also encourages me to
be positive all the time.I will never forget his smiles.

我，我连演讲稿都写过很好的，放心吧

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