1、fine day ——a fine day；（缺少不定冠词）2、send——sent（与前面的was一起构成被动语态，所以要用过去分词）3、but believed——and believed（因为动词excited和believed之间是并列关系）4、comes up to me——came up to me9前后时态一致，均用一般过去时态）5、the one scoring——the more scoring（句型the more...the more...表示越...越....）6、the one which——the one who（先行词是人时，关系代词要用who，不能用which）7、Deeply impressing——Deeply impressed（表示深受感动应该用过去分词，而不是用现在分词）请采纳，谢谢支持！
1行：it is 后加 a = a fine day 2行：send - sent3行：but - and4行：comes - came5行：minute -加s6行：is -was7行：really -real8行：impressing - impressed望采纳
1, a fine day2, sent3, and believe4, but give5, came up6, minutes7, your leg was hurt 8, scoring most9, that ( who) tries10, impressed
fine---a finesend---sentbelieved---believingcomes---came正确one---one who'sreally---realimpressing---impressed
对应每一行：It is a fine dayand sent to and believed I would score the most.去掉could。 Tom came up to mea few minutes. ....your leg was hurt.the true winnerthe one who tries his best is the real winnerimpressed