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I'm a 19 years old girl from JiNan. I like design very much and major in it,but not interested in English,so that I can't learn English very well.
And now,I'm learning Korean.It's my favorite language.
Besides,I had paid many attention to this prefect school.I hope I can enter for further study.I will work hard and I think I can learn a lot.Please give me a chance , thanks.

Yours sincerely

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hello everyone.I'm a 19 years old girl from JiNan.I like design very much.I am not interested in English,so that I can learn English well.But now,I'm learning Korean.It's my favorite language.
I had paid many attention to this prefect school.I hope I can study here.I think I can learn too mang knowlage here.Please give me a chance.

我才初二，英语水平欠佳．