急！ 求专业 英文翻译 （不要在线翻译，语法单词务必要准确）谢谢各位大虾~

The analysis of the objectives and existing significance of online banking were carried out, and the summarization was made for the development status quo in China’s online banking. A further analysis is made to examine the organization, character and modes of the online banking. The online banking security technologies is emphasized, the present problems existing in online banking security is put forward. And the solution and development strategies are put forward against the said problems. The final analysis is made based on the cases study in the Construction Bank.

翻译要点：
1. 论文与摘要很少主动色彩，因此尽可能少地用主动语态。例如论文是不会做“分析”或“提出”等的行为动作；
2. 部分地方也要考虑行为动作的时态，请见我的翻译；
3. 原文中的“分析：用量多，需要做部分调整，例如第二个“接着对网络银行......进行了分析”加了"further analysis”；第三个“然后重点分析......保障技术”用"emphasize"就足以了；第四个“最后......进行了分析”用"final analysis"。

请提问朋友考虑我对你的原文提出的问题，你原文中这四个“分析”有点过于重复。

我现在还在从事科技文献摘要英文校对审核，经过“文献题录与摘要”专业培训。

若有其他异议，请提出来，商榷。

This paper analyzes the objectives and significance of online banking and presents a summarization of the present state of development in China’s online banking. It further examines the compositions, characteristics and modes of online banking, specifically focuses on the analysis of the online banking security technologies and their existing problems. The paper then proposes some relevant solutions to the existing problems as well as the development strategies, and finally conducts an analysis based on the case study of China Construction Bank.

[英语牛人团]

This article has carried on the analysis to the network bank goal and the existence significance, summarized the network bank Our country Network Bank development present situation.Then to the network bank composition, the characteristic, the pattern has carried on the analysis.Then has with emphasis analyzed the network bank safety control technology, proposed the network bank safety control technology existence question, proposes the corresponding solution and the development countermeasure in view of its existence question.Finally unified the construction bank case to carry on the analysis.

This article analyses the targets and meanings of Network Banks and summaries the development situation of national Network Banks. Then it analyses the composition, features and model of Network Banks. Next it lays stress on analysing security supporting technology of Network Banks, and puts forward the issues of security supporting technology of Network Banks, and proposes the corresponding solutions and development strategies to aim at these issues. At last it integrates the examples of Construction Bank to analyse.

呃。不会，你找个外国人来。