Music makes a better life.
这样表述自然些,不用那些高级词汇,反而弄巧成拙
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Music can make life more beautiful / wonderful /splendid. 这句中“生活”是不可数名词所以前不能加冠词。
这句意译一下更好:Music leads a more colorful life.
Music can make the life more fabulous.
Better music, better life.