一篇英语作文！求助，谢谢大家了

这是我写的,给你参考下:
It has been five and half a year since my first getting to learn English.I'm on fired for it,especially in English reading.The best way I consider to master English is to listen,to speak,and to read.Only by drowning in reading--the real circumstance of language learning--will we be able to master and use English.In the past few years,I had been learning English with great difficuilties,as I was always trying to recite those things mecanically.But as time goes by,I gradually found that learning English not only rely on our memory,but on making what we have learnt vivid and brilliant as well.Now I'm doing listening practice 2 days a week,and meanwhile reciting 10-30 words a day.I'm try to do more reading as well.
I think that one should relax before having the examinations,so that he would be able to make progress.
I'm mean to learn more English in order to develop my interests in English.
And those are my former and present methods of learning English,including what to do to improve our learning skills.
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我基本按你的文字写的,呵呵,应该过得去吧~~

It is 5years and a half since I began to learn English .I have great interest in english ,especially in english reading. I think the best way to learn english is to listen ,read aloud and write. Only in such atmosphere can you command the languge.
I used to recite everything but soon realized that it is more important to use what you learned.
Now I do listening exercises two days a week.Every day I recite ten to thirten new words.what's more ,I also do more readings .
Before exames you'd better relax yourself.I think only in this way can you make progreses.From now on ,I will pay more attention to my english. this is my English-learning methods.
虽然尽量不用过复杂结构和你未学的单词，但还是有个别句子非用不可，看不懂的你自己改改

I've been learning English for 5 and a half years.
I'm very interested in English.Especially the reading.I think the best way of learning English is reading and listening. Only by drowning in reading--the real circumstance of language learning--will we be able to master and use English.In the past few years,I had been learning English with great difficuilties,as I was always trying to recite those things mecanically.But as time goes by,I gradually found that learning English not only rely on our memory,but on making what we have learnt vivid and brilliant as well.Now I'm doing listening practice 2 days a week,and meanwhile reciting 10-30 words a day.I'm try to do more reading as well.
I think that one should relax before having the examinations,so that he would be able to make progress.
I'm mean to learn more English in order to develop my interests in English.
And those are my former and present methods of learning English,including what to do to improve our learning skills.
是按范文一字一句翻译的，可能语言有点僵硬,望采纳!

我英语可以,但他们翻译的很不错
对于学英语的建议
首先就是多读多写加强口语练习
生活中尽量使用英语交流
当然,语法更是重要
不能死记
但也要用功,记语法时举个例子,渐渐在脑海里理解,琢磨
另外,每天都要坚持练习,哪怕看一篇小英语文章也行.
总之,兴趣一直保持是最重要的